Greedy Gurtrude Log Attempt #1
11 years, 2 months & 7 days ago
20th Sep 2013 10:33 1 Christmas Tree Biscuits Thunder Potato
2 Magic Cupcake 250 mp
3 Chocolate Brownie Sundae Thunder Shirt
4 Dakota Cake
500mp
5 Ancient Bread ....We'll see if I manage to get it in time haha. After a mad dash I managed to get the bread with 15 mins to spare. Cost 630k! Prize 750MP
6 wooden pearl (had it)
1000mp
7 radioactive hot dog (5k)
1250mp
8 bolimo dip (12k) thunder sword
9 purple easter egg (500k)
1500mp
10 winter potato (135k)
1750mp
11 giant pineapple, baguette, 8th birthday cupcake (had all)
2000mp
12 mini pearl Cherry Gummy Chibs Paws jar of blood (300k)
Sniffles(minipet)
13 American Easter Egg White Chocolate Equilor (had)
2500mp
14 Egg Sausage Bacon Muffin Raspbery Ice Cream Cone(had)
3000mp
15 Neek Easter Egg Bolimo Easter Egg (600k)
4000mp
16 Tarantula Zoink Dip (i MIGHT FAIL!)
ATTEMPT #1: Failed on Level 16 Cost 2,182,500
Feedback on Chapter 1 please!?
11 years, 5 months & 17 days ago
11th Jun 2013 20:13 Hello ,
I would love for some feedback ASAP! It's a little long but if you complete it I'll send you little something as as a thanks
This is YA, it does have some light swearing, so know that. Nothing too bad though.
Link to chapter is here :
https://yarny.me/share/PJcbbc
QUESTIONS
1.Does it go too fast?
2.Is there anything as a reader you want explained immediately? (like things that seem immediately confusing, not like why people are this way or that etc)
3. What is your impression of the main character? World? Situation?
4. Would you want to keep reading?
5. If so, would you like to see the MC go straight to where he is headed and jump in learning stuff as you go OR would you rather have a flashback the next chapter about what led up to the events of chapter 1?
6. Any particular likes and dislikes, or anything else you would like to bring up!
Please post replies on this blog.
Thanks!
Self Reminder (Rapunzel Gourmet and Prices)
11 years, 5 months & 19 days ago
9th Jun 2013 20:03 Angel Pearl 30kbp 113 mp---90k BUY MP
Fairy Cake 8k bp 40k mp ---24k BUY BP
Fairy Pearl 23.5k bp 95kmp ---75k BUY MP
Funky Pearl 60k bp 250kmp---180 BUP BP
Happy Pearl 25k bp 200k mp ---75 BUY BP
Jar of Nectar 88,750 k bp 500kmp---267 BUY BP
Love Berries 43.5 k bp 400kmp---130 BUY BP
Milk Chocolate Rapunzel 16k bp 75kmp--48K BUY BP
Mint Chocolate Repunzel 14k bp 60k mp---42K BUY BP
Pink Blood 200k bp BUY BP
Pink DNA 100k bp BUY BP
Princess Pearl 50k bp 120K MP ---BUY MP
Princess Tea 115k bp 360 k mp ---BUY MP
Rapunzel Gumball 35k bp 160k mp ----105k buy BP
Rapunzel Potato 22k bp 125k mp ----66 BUY BP
Seasonal Pearl 65bp 475kmp ----195K BUY BP
Sewer Gumball 40kbp 154kmp -----120K BUY MP
White Chocolate Rapunzel 12k bp 61kmp--- 36k BUY BP
820k MP Total
390 BP (exculding 300k for dna and blood)
Camp Nanowrimo Club! Calling all Mara Writers!
11 years, 8 months & 8 days ago
21st Mar 2013 20:21 Hi ,
I am starting a Nanowrimo based club for those of us on Mara that participate in the Nano events. There are no obligations either! But know that I plan for it to be a fun encouraging enviroment, where we can push one another to reach our goals and get through writer's block.
No need to stay active or apart of the club after the event! Though I will be continually jump starting with every new nano event. (ie july and november)
Camp starts in 10 days! I hope to see you apart of my club.
If you have an questions send me an mm.
Club link: http://www.marapets.com/club.php?id=183720
Random Concoction Log
11 years, 8 months & 11 days ago
18th Mar 2013 13:55 1.Your pet is now no longer hungry or tired and is really happy!
2.Your pet is now no longer hungry or tired and is really happy!
3. Your pet was caught and has been arrested.You will need to go to the City's Prison to release your pet.
4.Your pet is now no longer hungry or tired and is really happy!
5.Your pet is now no longer hungry or tired and is really happy!
Fun way to waste 250k haha
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