this is the first part of a story im making up.. its about wen 2 of my friends and i get locked in a haunted house by the school bully. plz tell if you like it!

It was a dark thundery night, everything was quiet and the only thing that moved were the dark trees blowing in the wind. But there was always someone watching you, sitting in the window below the drapes, inside the house of Stuart black???

???Angela stop daydreaming and get out of bed!!!!!??? my mum called. ???Noooooo I???m sleeping??? I yawned drowsily. ???Don???t make me come down there??? my mum warned, ???ok ok I???m coming??? I moaned rubbing my eyes. It was the first day of school for 2009 and I was in year 6 and as much as I didn???t want to go to school I couldn???t wait to see all my friends.

As I walked down the hallway I looked at the clock, 8.30! I rushed to my bag, got my lunch, packed my books and ran out door saying ???see-you mum, bye dad, got to run!???

I only just got to school on time??? the moment I stepped into my class room I heard a ???RING!!!!??? (The siren). I walked into the classroom feeling a little bit embarrassed since everyone was staring at me. It didn???t bother the teacher though because she was checking the roll. Then I forced myself to walk through the middle of the class room and sit down next to my friends Alex and Allana.

Alex (Allie) has reddish-brown hair, is fairly tall, is 11years old and has quite a temper when she wanted to use it. On the other hand Allana (Lana) has light brown hair, is reasonably tall for her age, is 10 years old and absolutely adores horses. ???Hi what have you been up to on the holidays???? I whispered to both of them. ???Nothing much??? they both replied ???yeah same here??? I said getting bored. By this time the teacher had finished marking the roll. My teacher, Mrs Tinderson had very dark brown hair, was about 40 and could get very strict if we didn???t pay attention in class.

At recess I grabbed my packet of cookies from my bad and went over to my friends, they always take longer than me to get there recess out of there bags. Anyway I was trying to keep clear of the bright pink bag in the middle of all the bags ??? you want to know why, Polly Patterson.

She had shiny black hair, was the tallest person in my age group, is the most popular person in the school, ALWAYS gets