longer version of prologue (reeaad meeee)

???No! Get away,??? the fifteen year old girl, with curly black hair and sky blue eyes, screamed as her bloody feet hit the wet pavement outside of an unknown neighborhood. Left foot, right foot, left, right, left, right.
Rain mixed with hail hit her body forcefully. She fell over in pain, but a loud burst of evil laughter came from behind her, so she stood up and ran as fast as she could away from the laughing.
???You can run, but you can???t hide,??? an evil voice rang around her. The sounds of snickering was everywhere, but she kept running, in fear of loosing her life.
BANG! BANG!
He has a gun! The girl widened her eyes, feeling a bullet pierce her skin. She started running quicker, but another bullet became lodged in her back, causing her to stumble into a light post. Blinking rapidly, she ran into an alley and into a dumpster.
???Oh come on Jade,??? the voice said right outside the dumpster, ???If your God was real, wouldn???t He have saved you by now? Come out and face your death.???
Jade was breathing heavily into her hand as tears rolled down her face. She heard the breathing of the man, and the slight sound of laughing.
The rain pounded on the dumpster.
The pain she thought clenching her teeth. I???m going to???
The dumpster door opened, revealing a nicely dressed man with a kind smile. He helped her out of the dumpster and pushed her forward forcefully, causing her to run.
BANG! BANG! BANG!
First bullet, into her right shoulder, second, into her upper thigh. She gasped for air, but it was no use, by the time she started to run again, another bullet lodged itself in her neck.
Jade fell over into the street as blood, her blood, spread around her. The rain pounded onto her torn, black, shirt and her black pants. She breathed heavily, causing her body to raise and fall slowly.
Breath in, Jade, she thought feeling dizzier and dizzier by the second, ???W-who are y-you????
???I???m your worst nightmare, Jade,??? the man stepped on her back. He kneeled down, into her blood, and smiled as he put the gun to her head.
BANG!

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short version of prologue

i hope ya like my prologue. have fun readin it
???No! Get away,??? the fifteen year old girl, with curly black hair and sky blue eyes, screamed as her bloody feet hit the pavement outside of an unknown neighborhood. Left foot, right foot, left, right, left, right.
???You can run, but you can???t hide,??? an evil voice rang around her. Sounds of snickering was everywhere, but she kept running, in fear of loosing her life.
BANG! BANG!
He has a gun! The girl widened her eyes, feeling a bullet pierce her skin. She started running quicker, but another bullet became lodged in her back, causing her to stumble into a light post. Blinking rapidly, she ran into an alley and into a dumpster.
???Oh come on Jade,??? the voice said right outside the dumpster, ???If your God was real, wouldn???t He have saved you by now? Come out and face your death.???
Jade was breathing heavily into her hand as tears rolled down her face. The pain she thought clenching her teeth. I???m going to???
The dumpster door opened, revealing a nicely dressed man with a kind smile. He helped her out of the dumpster and pushed her, causing her to run.
BANG! BANG! BANG!
First bullet, into her right shoulder, second, into her upper thigh. She gasped for air, but it was no use, by the time she started to run again, another bullet lodged itself in her neck.
Jade fell over and her world went black.