Here is what I have of Dreaming Insanity so far.

Dreaming Insanity

The stone road leading up to the cottage was a long road. It was a lonely walk to my, Peach Gazelle Parker, home. All of my family, except for my grandmother, was dead. They all died when I was young. My mom died shortly after I was born into the world. My dad died when I was five, of the Spanish influenza epidemic. I wasn???t touched by it. If I was, would I still be here today?
???Peach? Are you here? I heard you open the door.??? My grandmother seemed to be clueless about everything. She was blind and has been since I was eight. I am fifteen now.
???Yes, I???m here Grandmother. What do you want me to cook for you???? I asked.
???I would like to have some chicken and dumplings.??? She said.
I started cooking them, and 20 minutes later, a food that looked so bad it made me lose my appetite, was ready.
???Grandmother! Your food is ready.??? She came into the kitchen wobbly, like usual, and I guided her to the table so she wouldn???t fall down.
???Thank you deary. How was work at the tailor store today? Did any one come in???? She said.
I had to think for a minute before I could answer.
???Yes, two people came in today. One of those needed a suit, the other a dress. The customers were Mr. Albine and Mrs. Bloxy.??? I told her.
My stomach grumbled. I didn???t want to eat the chicken and dumplings, but I had to. I spooned out some and it spilled into my porcelain bowl. I took a bite. Yuck!
???What do you think of your meal grandmother???? I wanted to know what she thought of it.
???I think it is pitiful.??? I knew my old grandmother would say that.
???Grandmother, I have to go back to the tailor store now, bye.???
I picked up my dress skirt so it wouldn???t get dirty and I started walking to the tailor store.

???Good evening Mr. Biloxi.??? I greeted him. ???How is your suit coming along????
???It???s coming along just the way I planned Miss. Parker.???
???That???s good.??? I told him. ???Mrs. Jolin? Where are you???? I said loudly.
???I???m over here deary.??? I looked to where the noise came from.
I walked toward her. I needed to ask her where the next customer was. When I asked, she said that she wasn???t at the store yet.
I sighed. I started gathering the things I needed to help design what Mrs. Jackson needed. She did say she wanted a dress. My eyel