My song I am working on..

I am still working on this song..I don't know why I wrote, I just felt inspired. Please give advice or support! It's appreciated! So here's the song so far:


It???s like you???re trying to breath
But there???s not oxygen
It???s like you???re trying to walk away
But they keep pulling you in
It???s like you???re trying to run
But they catch up in one stride
Sometimes you just want to
Find a corner and hide.
But when you look ???em straight in the eye
You see who they are really, inside
And now I wonder why
You said good-bye
Your fake friendship,
Tore me in two
Now my cold heart,
Is trying to live without you..
Chorus;
Sometimes you have to take risks
You gotta try,
Sometimes you gotta,
Lift your wings and fly.
Just close your eyes