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This is a mono-tetra style poem that I wrote during a creative writing lesson. Tell me what you think:

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You were born weighing four pounds three,
crying out loud, crying for me,
you don't know who you want to be,
hush now baby, hush now baby,

You don't know what tomorrow brings,
you've not long left, the angel sings,
onto life you no longer cling,
now spread your wings, now spread your wings,

With your halo away you fly,
higher and higher in the sky,
as you left I started to cry,
this is goodbye, this is goodbye.
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-Posy