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johnnybgoode
a pathway,
a sheltered view. they sit.
together but not touching
and they both understand.
the drapes that fall from the trees
hide them,
and alone but together they know.
one final path to be taken, one walk to be took,
the pathway awaits their entrance.
with love in their hearts and tears in their eyes,
they rise.
strength gained from strength,
a hand within a hand
they step forward.
one pathway, one walk, one future,
two people, one soul.
but wait, there is more
the drapes now are rising
the wind is blowing
the storm is coming
the rain is coming
the earth is moving.
they stand and wait, watching, listening, humming
and the drapes close.
the final curtain.
but they are not alone,
never alone,
they'll always be together.

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this poem has been copyrighted to myself so please, as i always ask, do not copy and paste onto any other blogs - many thanks - johnny x
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johnnybgoode27 Sep 20112comments
Comments (2)
  • translator 58 translatorIt's great c: the wind is blowing the storm is coming the rain is coming the earth is moving. ~ Here, I would change 'the rain is coming' to 'the rain is falling' so it's less repetitive(: But it's just a suggestion, and either way, it's an awesome poem. x
  • eeveeerb 42 eeveeerbi like it....very romantic
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