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johnnybgoode
  1. just rambling i guess
    26th Apr 2015 07:41
    9 years & 7 months ago
  2. an endless tale
    22nd Oct 2014 07:17
    10 years, 1 month & 3 days ago
  3. i've now decided
    21st Jul 2014 05:14
    10 years, 4 months & 6 days ago
  4. acorns
    4th Jul 2014 05:28
    10 years, 4 months & 23 days ago
  5. inanimate people
    14th Nov 2011 18:32
    13 years & 10 days ago
  6. inanimate people / contours
    30th Oct 2011 18:29
    13 years & 25 days ago
  7. just yesterday
    24th Oct 2011 20:56
    13 years & 1 month ago
  8. together they know
    27th Sep 2011 17:08
    13 years, 1 month & 28 days ago
  9. animal rescue
    8th Sep 2011 19:04
    13 years, 2 months & 16 days ago
  10. affluence
    8th Sep 2011 18:06
    13 years, 2 months & 16 days ago
together they know
13 years, 1 month & 28 days ago
27th Sep 2011 17:08

a pathway,
a sheltered view. they sit.
together but not touching
and they both understand.
the drapes that fall from the trees
hide them,
and alone but together they know.
one final path to be taken, one walk to be took,
the pathway awaits their entrance.
with love in their hearts and tears in their eyes,
they rise.
strength gained from strength,
a hand within a hand
they step forward.
one pathway, one walk, one future,
two people, one soul.
but wait, there is more
the drapes now are rising
the wind is blowing
the storm is coming
the rain is coming
the earth is moving.
they stand and wait, watching, listening, humming
and the drapes close.
the final curtain.
but they are not alone,
never alone,
they'll always be together.

**********

this poem has been copyrighted to myself so please, as i always ask, do not copy and paste onto any other blogs - many thanks - johnny x

eeveeerb
i like it....very romantic
113 years, 1 month & 2 days ago 23rd Oct 2011 08:07
 
It's great c:



the wind is blowing
the storm is coming
the rain is coming
the earth is moving.
~
Here, I would change 'the rain is coming' to 'the rain is falling' so it's less repetitive(:
But it's just a suggestion, and either way, it's an awesome poem. x
113 years, 1 month & 28 days ago 27th Sep 2011 17:48
 
  1. just rambling i guess
    26th Apr 2015 07:41
    9 years & 7 months ago
  2. an endless tale
    22nd Oct 2014 07:17
    10 years, 1 month & 3 days ago
  3. i've now decided
    21st Jul 2014 05:14
    10 years, 4 months & 6 days ago
  4. acorns
    4th Jul 2014 05:28
    10 years, 4 months & 23 days ago
  5. inanimate people
    14th Nov 2011 18:32
    13 years & 10 days ago
  6. inanimate people / contours
    30th Oct 2011 18:29
    13 years & 25 days ago
  7. just yesterday
    24th Oct 2011 20:56
    13 years & 1 month ago
  8. together they know
    27th Sep 2011 17:08
    13 years, 1 month & 28 days ago
  9. animal rescue
    8th Sep 2011 19:04
    13 years, 2 months & 16 days ago
  10. affluence
    8th Sep 2011 18:06
    13 years, 2 months & 16 days ago