Black (Poem)

I quickly whipped this up when i read ParamoreLover13's poems in her blog (check them out!) Feedback is always welcome...
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Welcome to {%USERNAME%]'s poem performance. Here it is! What you have been waiting for!...

[center]Black[/center]

Black is an eclipse,
Covering the sky,
Losing happiness,
From those walking by.

Black widow spiders,
Scattered on the floor,
Waiting for a knock,
Coming from the door.

Opening the door,
Awaiting your fate.
Noticing poison,
Sitting on a plate.

The absence of light,
Is what i call black.
Not seeing ahead,
Trapped in a small sack.

Death is black,
A reminder of,
Our Mortality,
Black is also love.

Black is elegance,
Beauty to the eye.
Black is forever black.
A time where all, must die.
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Well... What do you think?! Please comment and all feedback(including criticism) is allowwed.

This was made on the spot, i have no evidence but it was extremely hard. This is no relation to anyone i know, not even myself as i am a very fiery and action-packed person.

Thank you and goodnight.