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Terrminated
  1. Ignorance and Innocence
    28th Mar 2011 22:57
    13 years, 7 months & 6 days ago
  2. PISCES; breeding
    14th Feb 2011 00:29
    13 years, 8 months & 19 days ago
  3. PISCES; shoppe
    12th Feb 2011 23:01
    13 years, 8 months & 20 days ago
  4. PISCES; owners
    12th Feb 2011 18:51
    13 years, 8 months & 20 days ago
  5. PISCES; info
    25th Nov 2010 01:50
    13 years, 11 months & 8 days ago
  6. I am a girl. (I hope)
    3rd Jul 2010 03:37
    14 years, 4 months & 2 days ago
  7. When the Imagination Runs Wild
    24th May 2010 20:17
    14 years, 5 months & 10 days ago
  8. A Cocoon of Lust
    6th Apr 2010 23:19
    14 years, 6 months & 28 days ago
  9. Unamed Story part 1
    26th Jan 2010 22:42
    14 years, 9 months & 6 days ago
  10. Saye's Story Introductory
    9th Jan 2010 21:03
    14 years, 9 months & 23 days ago
Saye's Story Introductory
14 years, 9 months & 23 days ago
9th Jan 2010 21:03

This is the introductory thing for a short story I'm writing. If/when I get any information about anything wrong, mail me telling me how it's wrong and I'll fix it. Thanks.

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I'm an Aussie. At least, my name says I am. I don't know if I really came form Australia. Probably not. Why can't I look it up on Ancestry.com? Well, for one I have no idea what that is. Secondly, I can't read, and I can't type. Why? Because I'm an Australian Shepherd. Yup, you heard me right. I'm a dog. I've heard humans say something like d-o-g. Another word for dog I guess. Others call me a "canine", a "hound", or a "woof woof". What's that supposed to mean anyway? Do humans think I say "woof woof"?

I'm getting off topic. I tend to do that. Like I was saying, I'm an Australian Shepherd. I'm a medium sized dog, not too big but not too small either. Just how I like it. People say I have "pendant ears", but I think I'm just happy having any ears at all. My eyes are very weird. I've looked into streams, and well- I have weird eyes! One is pale blue, one is pale amber-green. But that's not it! My right eye, the blue one, is only half blue. The other half is the same pale green color as my left eye. The cool thing is that I have perfectly normal eyesight! I like my eyes. They're different than every other dog's.

My fur is what humans call "blue merl". But since I doubt any of you know what that is, ( I know I don't! ) I'm basically white with close-knit spots of black, and I have one tan paw. I have an almost blue shine, and my fur is long. Really long. It gets matted up all the time.

Okay, I've told you what I look like. What about my name? Well, I'll tell you this: It rhymes with day. You haven't guessed yet? You can't figure it out? Fine, then! I'll tell you. My name is Saye. Weird name, I know. I didn't pick it though. My owners did. Actually, I think my first name was Lilly...A long, long time ago. I...I don't want to talk about it.

I've gone through a lot. And a lot is bad. You shouldn't hear. You wouldn't want too. No, trust me. No matter what you say you can't convince me. I've gone through horrible, horrible things. But...Since you ask. Since you ask with such a sincere look on your face...I will tell you.

But be warned. The tale you are about to hear is full of grief, pain, and most of all terror.

This is my story.

Terrminated
blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarg
114 years, 8 months & 22 days ago 10th Feb 2010 17:54
 
Brilliant story, Dez.

I love the idea of how the dog thinks like a human, asking questions and discussing things with the audience.
114 years, 9 months & 22 days ago 10th Jan 2010 18:58
 
Terrminated
That's it's job!

Finally I write something worth reading! SD
114 years, 9 months & 22 days ago 10th Jan 2010 17:53
 
ANother great job Dez! xD
The way you wrote that made me /want/ to read more
114 years, 9 months & 22 days ago 10th Jan 2010 17:48
 
  1. Ignorance and Innocence
    28th Mar 2011 22:57
    13 years, 7 months & 6 days ago
  2. PISCES; breeding
    14th Feb 2011 00:29
    13 years, 8 months & 19 days ago
  3. PISCES; shoppe
    12th Feb 2011 23:01
    13 years, 8 months & 20 days ago
  4. PISCES; owners
    12th Feb 2011 18:51
    13 years, 8 months & 20 days ago
  5. PISCES; info
    25th Nov 2010 01:50
    13 years, 11 months & 8 days ago
  6. I am a girl. (I hope)
    3rd Jul 2010 03:37
    14 years, 4 months & 2 days ago
  7. When the Imagination Runs Wild
    24th May 2010 20:17
    14 years, 5 months & 10 days ago
  8. A Cocoon of Lust
    6th Apr 2010 23:19
    14 years, 6 months & 28 days ago
  9. Unamed Story part 1
    26th Jan 2010 22:42
    14 years, 9 months & 6 days ago
  10. Saye's Story Introductory
    9th Jan 2010 21:03
    14 years, 9 months & 23 days ago