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johnnybgoode
darkness is falling
the bleakness calling out to me
as the trees bend down their heads to sleep
leafless grey arms reaching for peace
embracing my soul with tired fingers
i walk alone along their sheltered path
my heart echoing the distant sound of thunder
the distant sound of pain
where am i going i ask?

as the first raindrop falls to my cheek
the trees awaken and begin to nod their heads
the crack of thunder
and then silence as my footsteps cease
i stand alone and raise my face to the rain
comforted by nature and full of humility
warmth surrounds me and
i discover i have found where i was going

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copyright of this poem has been registered to myself so please do not copy and paste onto random blogs - many thanks - johnny
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johnnybgoode15 May 20099comments
Comments (9)
  • Ahti 0 Ahtivery nice, it doesn't always flow that well but it's something you need to learn just by writing and writing and writing don't forget to capitalize I though
  • dippydoda 0 dippydodaGreat Poem! I Love To Write Poems Myself. Keep Up The Good Work Johnny ~Ash~
  • valpal781994 0 valpal781994god your grate ^_^
  • Kittuns 53 KittunsWow ~Mimi~
  • majette 0 majetteThis and your other poem are great!!!
  • mikamay 0 mikamaywow.. you never cease to amaze me johnny..
  • RaziRules 0 RaziRulesWow, i get bored when i write poems, so i usually turn them into jokes
  • translator 58 translatoras the trees bend down their heads to sleep ~ As the trees bow their heads, to sleep ? leafless grey arms reaching for peace ~ Reach instead of reaching? embracing my soul with tired fingers ~ Embrace? It's a lovely poem :3 Beautiful, really. You are very talented!
  • fluffynkacy 75 fluffynkacybeautiful
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