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hisgothiclove1
  1. Meh Favorite Bands. (:
    19th Apr 2009 12:57
    17 years, 3 months & 1 day ago
  2. I Could Be - By Me
    18th Feb 2009 19:25
    17 years, 4 months & 29 days ago
  3. My song is called Falling Short.
    19th Jan 2009 07:08
    17 years, 5 months & 30 days ago
hisgothiclove1
hisgothiclove1 6 Comments
My song is called Falling Short.
17 years, 5 months & 30 days ago
19th Jan 2009 07:08

I wrote this myself. It is called Falling Short Rate it? thanx...




(Can you stop this chaos?)
(You can't stop this chaos)
(Please say the words)
(Please)

Please, Please forget me,
I won't be back again.
Maybe one morning you'll wake up, and to your conscience you'll say,
There is something wrong.

You won't miss me that I do know.
You should've forgotten me long ago.
Am I just that selfish?
Am I just too paranoid?

Isn't something wrong?
Is there something wrong with me?...

Even though you're the sacrifice,
You won't try to hold me, not now.
Though I'd die for you to love me,
I'd still be alone.

Is there something wrong with me?...

(Can you stop this chaos?)
(Please stop this chaos)
(Please say the words)
(Please)

Please, Please forget me,
I won't be back again.
You don't know what I do to myself.
I sleep deeper and deeper and cry out.

Isn't something wrong?
Is there something wrong with me?

Even though you're sacrifice,
You won't try to love me, not ever.
Though I'd die for you to hold me,
I'll still be alone.

Is there something wrong with me?

If I cry, I'll cry knowing you don't care.
If I dream just to sleep, I'll wake without you there.
Isn't something wrong?
Is there something?

Even though you're the sacrifice,
You won't hold me, not now.
Though I'd die for you to Hold me,
I'll still be alone.

Isn't something wrong?...
Is there something wrong with me?...

(You can't stop this chaos)
(You can't stop this chaos.)
(You didn't say the words)

(Please)


cynicalecynicale
100000000000/10 i loved it
Bronze Shield 116 years, 11 months & 17 days ago 2nd Aug 2009 17:50
 
1000000000000000000/10
Bronze Shield 117 years, 5 months & 21 days ago 27th Jan 2009 17:05
 
8/10 - The structure and length of some of the sentences are a bit off, but otherwise, really well.
Bronze Shield 117 years, 5 months & 21 days ago 27th Jan 2009 17:04
 
HOLEH! YOUR FRIGGEN AWESOME! -huggles-

1000000000000000000/10
Bronze Shield 117 years, 5 months & 21 days ago 27th Jan 2009 17:03
 
ok thanx! :]
Bronze Shield 117 years, 5 months & 25 days ago 24th Jan 2009 10:02
 
um...wow...

9.9/10

Some of the sentance structure could use some work other than that...holy crap is all I can say!
Bronze Shield 117 years, 5 months & 25 days ago 24th Jan 2009 09:50
 
  1. Meh Favorite Bands. (:
    19th Apr 2009 12:57
    17 years, 3 months & 1 day ago
  2. I Could Be - By Me
    18th Feb 2009 19:25
    17 years, 4 months & 29 days ago
  3. My song is called Falling Short.
    19th Jan 2009 07:08
    17 years, 5 months & 30 days ago


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