My Poem's

Hi im savvy19 and im real life i love to write poem's.Here are some that i have wrote.Do not steal these are copyrighted.Please comment.

The Emocinal Rain

The sun is shining
But im under the rain,
It's a clear blue sky
But it is raining inside of me,
Im smiling
But im upset,
Im listening
But never speaking,
I help people
But never get helped,
I act like im fine
But i kill myself inside,

I wish someone once in a while
would listen and not speak
when that day comes I will be free.


NEXT PEOM

The Burning Breakfast

(this is a performance peom so think as it as someone performing it to you)

Mum's shouting "Get up."
and im dragging myself out of bed
to the smell of cooking bacon
Mum's still shouting "Get up."
"Im getting ready,"still dragging myself up
the pans spitting spit,spit
Then I hear my brother shouting"Were's my socks."
"There in the draw," im shouting
Im starting to turn off the cooker
but the gas is stl going,sssssss
Im shouting "Mum I don't know how to turn off the gas."
Im running around the kitchen worring
then the toast goes POP!
Mum walks in and presses a button to stop the gas
'Few' im wiping my forehead
then im turning around to find my brother eating my toast in myt little kitchen in my seat 'Uh typical'