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johnnybgoode
a dog sits waiting
in the hot midday sun
too faithful to leave
too frightened to run

he???s been there for days now
with nothing to do
but sit by the road
just waiting for you

he can???t understand
why you left him that day
he thought you were stopping
to take him to play

he???s sure you???ll come back
and that???s why he stays
how long can he suffer?
how many more days?

his legs have grown weak
his throat???s parched and dry
he???s sick now from hunger
he falls with a sigh

he lays down his head
and closes his eyes
i wish you could see
how a waiting dog dies

PLEASE TREAT ANIMALS KINDLY
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johnnybgoode21 Sep 200881comments
Comments (81)
  • ashere2k8 0 ashere2k8now i have read this makes my throat nt feel good and i absouty hate animal crulity and never will accept it it so heart breaking
  • Pugalicious 0 PugaliciousPooor dog! If i saw him, I would immeadiatley pick him up and take him home and give him all the food and water he wants and when hes done,take him to the vet.
  • 0 midnightskyshine8they should be treated the same like people! I just don't understand animals are an important thing to our world so why kill and abuse -.- poor dog I'd imediatly do the same thing too I love animals there so cute and make loving pets I wish I were able to save an animal and feed it lots and care for it before it goes away
  • MMoody 26 MMoodyAll of my cats and my grandmas and great-grandmas are either from the humane society or we have found the outside.
  • osina 0 osinaawww i can't bare it when people treat dogs like that it is not nice thats why wen i grow up i want 2 work 4 the rspca
  • Alysonxoxo 0 AlysonxoxoAwww!That touched my heart. That is so cruel.
  • Alysonxoxo 0 AlysonxoxoI wish animals could talk so I could see how my dog (Arthur) Feels. Ihim
  • snafflebit 0 snafflebitThat made me cry.
  • dippydoda 0 dippydodaI Hav 3 Dogs And Ones A Pup.Id Hate To See Mine Die.Id Cry To The End Of Light! Thnkfully A lotta Ppl Do Take In Animals And Ungratfully Some Dont. But Im Just Glad I Hav My Babies! I Luv My Dogs.
  • BleuBubbleGum 0 BleuBubbleGumthat is very sad
  • manjola 0 manjolaMy dog died about a year ago I was saaad an he was only 5
  • 0 intolerantAww. Thats so sad
  • lilycat9697 0 lilycat9697WHO WOULD DO THAT TO A POOR LITTLE DOG!!! I ❤️ DOGS!!!
  • taha0taha 0 taha0tahahahahahaahahahahaahahaha
  • AllisonNevada 0 AllisonNevadaPoor Dog!
  • KIBBRY1001 0 KIBBRY1001y the poor poor dog
  • jessicanicole22 0 jessicanicole22Aww.
  • NeverSayNever01 8 NeverSayNever01Incredible poetry skills
  • eeveeerb 42 eeveeerbyou are very talented. reminds me of "hachi" very sad story, but an excellent tale of love and loyalty.
  • translator 58 translatorThis poem is beautiful. You should really become a published poet, if you are not one already. 😉 x
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