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Libby
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Broken doll -poem
15 years, 3 months & 17 days ago
14th Aug 2009 00:32

I created this poem tell me if its good or not because I am thinking of entering it in a school competition.

I am a broken doll
Full of Misery
Only one special person
Could do this to me

I weep
My feelings hurt
I am a broken doll
Full of misery

Full of holes
With an empty felling within
A part of me gone
I am a broken doll
Full of misery

No-one can see me
I've just dissapeared
No-one cares I'm gone
I am a broken doll
Full of misery

I sit here all alone
Thinking
Thinking I'm not wanted
Maybe, Perhaps
Someone can fix me
I am a broken doll
Full of misery

Deep inside
within me I know
Only them
Can save me now
I am a broken doll
Full of misery

I feel so far away
In a dream land
With my own way
I am a broken doll
Full of misery

I am a broken doll
It goes without saying
No friends
Sad
Lonely
And definitely
Full of misery

Please post and comment

Libby
Woah this was ages ago I was about 10-11 when i wrote this x]
113 years & 8 months ago 3rd Apr 2011 10:04
 
That is really good.
114 years, 11 months & 1 day ago 31st Dec 2009 06:19
 
AWESOME!
114 years, 11 months & 19 days ago 13th Dec 2009 01:54
 
GOOD!
115 years, 1 month & 27 days ago 5th Oct 2009 09:31
 
thats really good! keep up the good work
115 years, 3 months & 1 day ago 29th Aug 2009 11:24
 
Libby
i am making one right now =)
115 years, 3 months & 10 days ago 20th Aug 2009 13:18
 
u are really good in makin poems, thoo is sad.
you should make one about love:]
115 years, 3 months & 10 days ago 20th Aug 2009 13:15
 
Libby
=)
115 years, 3 months & 10 days ago 20th Aug 2009 11:18
 



115 years, 3 months & 10 days ago 20th Aug 2009 11:11
 
Libby
=) thanks
115 years, 3 months & 10 days ago 20th Aug 2009 11:09
 
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