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dreamybanana
  1. My novel's website!
    29th Dec 2009 11:28
    14 years, 11 months & 2 days ago
  2. Darkness (Poem)
    2nd Aug 2009 10:13
    15 years & 4 months ago
  3. I wanna get published! List
    6th Jul 2009 08:19
    15 years, 4 months & 27 days ago
  4. Corrupt (poem)
    1st Jun 2009 10:10
    15 years, 6 months & 1 day ago
  5. Destina Park// Opening Scene
    29th May 2009 03:10
    15 years, 6 months & 4 days ago
  6. Hey! Are you a writer?
    11th May 2009 12:48
    15 years, 6 months & 21 days ago
Hey! Are you a writer?
15 years, 6 months & 21 days ago
11th May 2009 12:48

If you are then post here, like a little writing community where I could read your work and you could read mine.

I'll try to review at least one blog per person, but what would be really great is that we could all review each others.

It's a big dream for a small blog girl but lets see what happens.

Feel free to post anything here.thumbsup.gif

Im a writter <3
115 years, 5 months & 19 days ago 12th Jun 2009 15:31
 
Ok UPDATE

There is now a WORD LIMIT
700 words max!
If I like it then I will request more.
115 years, 5 months & 22 days ago 10th Jun 2009 03:19
 
But really, I love writing!
115 years, 5 months & 22 days ago 9th Jun 2009 11:52
 
I am a writer Elf, I write the books Santa gives you!
115 years, 5 months & 22 days ago 9th Jun 2009 11:51
 
I'll post once i make something thats approprite for this site
115 years, 5 months & 29 days ago 3rd Jun 2009 09:35
 
MusicalWhale;

I give your story a 2-10.

silfuryn;

I give your story a 6-10, it sounds like later it might become like Warrior *cough* Cats. (I love Warriors, but seriously, it sounds like later it will be like Warriors.)
115 years, 6 months & 14 days ago 18th May 2009 12:32
 
I am now up to date with my blog.

Please post here instead of maramailing me as I get too many maramails I forget which ones need to be answered, where as here, I review all.

Also, please check out my poems too
THX
115 years, 6 months & 17 days ago 16th May 2009 04:16
 
Here is a small little thing I wrote up, no stealing!
A river flowed through the forest, a shimmer of blue in the light of the sun. It surged around bends and splashed against the rocks that were sticking out in its wake. A leaf dropped from an oak tree, lightly riding the wind on its downward flight. The leaf wobbled and jerked in the wind and came to rest in the river. The large body of water carried the leaf around sharp turns and around the stones. Finally, the oak leaf came to rest at the paws of a grey cat.
Shadow the cat looked intently at the battered leaf through sapphire eyes. She scooped up the leaf with a small paw. The leaf flew out of the water propelled by Shadow???s paw. Drips of water pooled off the leaf and back into the river where they had started. Shadowl mewed happily as she looked at the wet shinning leaf on the ground in front of her. She gave the leaf one more look and then headed back for camp. Her eyes sparkled in the bright sunlight.
The sun was high in the sapphire sky, a bright yellow sphere in a sea of dull blue. A green butterfly flew low in the sky outlined by golden sunlight. Shadowsighed looking around, this was a beautiful forest but she sensed something dark was happening, through all that lovely sunlight, butterflies and blossoming flowers was a dark presence, an ominous thing that lurked in the deepest and darkest places in the wood. The she-cat knew something was out of place. The forest looked perfect, yes, indeed it did. But under that hood of beauty was something dark. It was hiding out there just waiting to strike the unprotected.

115 years, 6 months & 18 days ago 14th May 2009 12:55
 
Here's a poem I wrote. I need rate/critique.

"Something moves within the hills,
Shapes in harmony with the darkness.
Eyes glitter.
Teeth snap.
A wolf pack appears".

"They prowl the hills,
In search of prey.
Moving like one bady,
One soul."

"One raises his muzzle,
The rest follow suit.
The night is alive with wolf song".

"I watch them with wonder.
The lead wolf gazes around
His eyes lock with mine."

"He looks away,
Arrogance tainting his movements.
Great King of The Hills."

"They pad wearily toward me,
Calmly around me.
Sniffing,
Snuffling.
They look up, and accept me at last.
I am wolf."
115 years, 6 months & 21 days ago 11th May 2009 13:24
 
  1. My novel's website!
    29th Dec 2009 11:28
    14 years, 11 months & 2 days ago
  2. Darkness (Poem)
    2nd Aug 2009 10:13
    15 years & 4 months ago
  3. I wanna get published! List
    6th Jul 2009 08:19
    15 years, 4 months & 27 days ago
  4. Corrupt (poem)
    1st Jun 2009 10:10
    15 years, 6 months & 1 day ago
  5. Destina Park// Opening Scene
    29th May 2009 03:10
    15 years, 6 months & 4 days ago
  6. Hey! Are you a writer?
    11th May 2009 12:48
    15 years, 6 months & 21 days ago