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phantomsnightout
  1. cool pics and stuff
    18th Dec 2009 14:43
    15 years, 2 months & 5 days ago
  2. MERRY CRIMBO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    18th Dec 2009 14:41
    15 years, 2 months & 5 days ago
  3. ur will is stronger
    12th Sep 2009 15:45
    15 years, 5 months & 11 days ago
  4. more poems
    20th May 2009 08:48
    15 years, 9 months & 3 days ago
  5. poems!
    4th May 2009 11:41
    15 years, 9 months & 19 days ago
poems!
15 years, 9 months & 19 days ago
4th May 2009 11:41

as you can tell from the title its about poems. check out khj11 and you can see three poems the first two are mine that i written for my girfriend 6 years ago on valentines. therefore i conclude that he is a thief and i am a poet at heart
if you want too read the poems i wriiten and khj11 stole scroll
down by the way they have been upgraded



coral glow,
down below.
i'll take you there,
for the love that we share.
loves everwhere.
down fleet street.
the place that we meet.
in the sky.
its everywhere,
face it,
you can't escape it.
so then i find,
in my mind.
theres a message of love,
brought by the sacred dove.


roses are red violets are blue,
everything i see reminds me of you.
i see a bike,
it reminds me of the days we used to play.
i see the see a romantic novel,
it reminds me of our first kiss.
oh yeah.
so what i'm trying to say,
is i wouldn't last another day.
without you
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phantomsnightout
thanks kittyme oh by the way kittyme i am sorry about blaming you doubting you being nasty to you and critisizing you
115 years, 9 months & 17 days ago 6th May 2009 07:38
 
You couldn't say that because Bluestar is the only one whos probably saying it to be over the top nice.
I rate it a 6/10 In some places it doesn't flow just right, you're no expert that's for sure but still, you have talent. Work just a little harder and you could be great.
115 years, 9 months & 18 days ago 6th May 2009 04:21
 
phantomsnightout
bluestar you have an excellent taste in poetry and i can't say that about limited or hamster
115 years, 9 months & 18 days ago 5th May 2009 08:25
 
4/10... u could work a little more
115 years, 9 months & 19 days ago 4th May 2009 13:18
 
I love it!!

Keep going!
115 years, 9 months & 19 days ago 4th May 2009 13:05
 
Not bad. But, you gotta work on them. I don't thing the are terrible and I dont thing they are great. They are... good.
115 years, 9 months & 19 days ago 4th May 2009 13:02
 
  1. cool pics and stuff
    18th Dec 2009 14:43
    15 years, 2 months & 5 days ago
  2. MERRY CRIMBO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    18th Dec 2009 14:41
    15 years, 2 months & 5 days ago
  3. ur will is stronger
    12th Sep 2009 15:45
    15 years, 5 months & 11 days ago
  4. more poems
    20th May 2009 08:48
    15 years, 9 months & 3 days ago
  5. poems!
    4th May 2009 11:41
    15 years, 9 months & 19 days ago