just a short story (part 2 and please commment!<img src=http://images.marapets.com/emoticons/

*It's 2013 now and I'm 15 I would just like to say this story is stupid and I'm obviously stealing some of the story from avatar the last airbender I wrote this when I was about 10 and I'm only keeping this up so I can come back in a couple of years and laugh at myself*
2 years later....
(ali had eventually grown fangs and wings that only came out at night)
ali walked outside to the graveyard and she saw her hometown far away she looked at the ground kicked a rock and wondered if she could ever go back suddenly she felt somone put theyre arm on her should she turned around to see her friend ashley she to was a traider and went to the vampire castle witch was why ali and her were best friends ashley gave ali a look and said "i know you miss your hometown and hey so do i but we cant go back!" ali sadly looked at ashley and said "i know i cant go now but when im older im gonna go back i have to i just know it!" and ali walked away ashley sighed and followed her
Dinner..
dinner was always the craziest time of the day you would see all the little kids having a food fight on the table and going crazy
ali and ashley walked into the room ducked for cover and took a plate of food and started to eat
Midnight..
it was night and all the vampires fangs and wings were out and everyone was ready to go outside but the half humans (ali and ashley)had to go to sleep . of course ali and ashley never went to sleep they just stayed up talking about theyre village and nothing more
Morning...
it was morning again and ali and ashley rushed outside to play once they got there they saw a group of people surrounding something ali and ashley rushed to see what had happened when they finally got to see it they didnt say a word nobody did because there infront of theyre faces was a comet that said "return the humans or meet your DOOM!" the vampires looked up at ali and ashley and the leader said "LEAVE IMEDIATLY!" ali and ashley looked at eachother confusingly and walked out to the desert
Later...
later that day ali and ashley stopped at a small town to buy some food and maps a tourist walked up to them and said " are you headed to the hidden town of Mysteria? oh and my name is katara im a water bender!" ali answered and said "no were not really sure were were headed and my name is ali and this is ashley nice to meet you!" katara looked at both of them and said "would you like to come with me to the hidden town its said that its filled with riches beyond your wildest dreams!" ali and ashley looked at eachother and said
"okay then well go" katara smiled and said " okay then oh and meet my pet river she can morph into anything so itll be easier to go to places!" and so then ali ashley and katara went off on theyre journey hoping they would be safe
Midnight...
ali and ashley looked at theyre teeth and at theyre back it was a miracle they werent vampires katara looked at them and said "thats because youre not in the vampire kingdom anymore! oh and im sensing that ali you have earth bending skills and ashley you have fire bending skills!"
ali and ashley look at eachother excitingly and yelled "YES!" suddenly they stopped and said " wait were gonna need someone to teach us!" katara smiled once more and said "look down !" ali and ashley looked down and saw they were in the air on kataras pet witch had morphed into a giant bird and right in the bottom of them was the earth kingdom
TO BE CONTINUED...